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Post by Goldwriter Tue Apr 06, 2010 12:27 am

This is a discussion topic for my series, The Gene Pool. As I do not want people to clog up my story with posts, this thread is here. Please post feedback (constructive criticism is fine, no insults or discouraging comments, no flaming or spamming either please).

The Gene Pool is copywrighted by me, Goldwriter, and should not be reproduced anywhere without my permission and credit. If you wish to use it, PM me and I may arrange something. Plagiarism is a criminal offence, people.

GW out...


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Post by Fox Tue Apr 06, 2010 11:11 am

oh that story is great.. poor pelipper he doesnt deserve to turn evil...i felt bad for the boy in the begining the pelipper walking out on him like that
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Post by Ventus Wed Apr 07, 2010 11:51 am

Seriously epic that is, I loved the way you wrote it, thoroughly gripping.
I myself wouldn't be able to write a pokemon fanfic in my opinion Razz
Looking Forward To The Rest Of The Series Very Happy
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Post by Goldwriter Wed Apr 07, 2010 6:29 pm

Thanks guys, glad you like it so far
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Post by Erebos Fri Apr 16, 2010 7:17 am

The story is great so far! I can't wait to find out what happens next! Hope you finish the next part soon.
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Post by Alley Kat Fri Apr 16, 2010 4:12 pm

great story! cant wait till nxt part
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Post by Goldwriter Fri Apr 16, 2010 6:06 pm

Yeah, I'm working on it now. I'll also have to adjust the layout because of the lighter forum colour.
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Post by superman910 Sat Apr 17, 2010 7:01 am

Great story gold keep up the great work
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Post by Goldwriter Sat Apr 17, 2010 10:49 pm

Eheh...may be some delays coz my computers freezing up.
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Post by bonzo Sun Apr 18, 2010 6:37 am

nice 1
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Post by superman910 Sun Apr 18, 2010 7:48 am

Nice story
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